i am writing a story.

  • kittenpowder
    11th Feb 2016 Member 2 Permalink

    I just wanted to spread the word that im writing a story.

    it can be found here:http://tinyurl.com/mystorypage.

  • jacob2
    11th Feb 2016 Member 3 Permalink
    Why are you using tinyurl?https://docs.google.com/document/d/1456oDUF5fAMwXKDgZO2-MwqV9omySs6TuUUp6Seuyxs/edit?usp=sharing

    Anyway, it does look like a story. But I didn't read it :p
  • kittenpowder
    11th Feb 2016 Member 0 Permalink

    @jacob2 (View Post)

     lol i dont know

  • Mrprocom
    12th Feb 2016 Moderator 0 Permalink
    Or you could just use hyperlinks!


    Anyway, good job.
  • nijalninja98
    13th Feb 2016 Member 1 Permalink

    Oh wow. I have no idea what it is about, but I am very curious to see where you go with it. It sounds like you have it thought out well in your head and that you are going to elaborate and all that. Until then I am very curious as to what you are going to do. The plot and events happen at immense speed and it is a lot to take in, but I really like it for now, however I feel that if it kept this up for an entire story; be it novel or short story, I would eventually have an aneurism trying to keep up. With that, I really like it at the moment. Keep it up.

  • NF
    13th Feb 2016 Member 1 Permalink

    @kittenpowder (View Post)

     Writting a book myself. Anyways great dialogue and story.

    Edited once by NUCLEAR_FOX. Last: 13th Feb 2016
  • jrbc1
    17th Feb 2016 Member 0 Permalink

    Huh... I'm pretty sure you (or some impersonator/faker, probably you) published this on Scratch too. Haven't read it yet, i don't really read stuff that isn't for school (Unless it's weird and funny or just funny. Like, not comedy funny, but stupid funny)

  • Comcast
    18th Feb 2016 Banned 0 Permalink
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  • kittenpowder
    19th Feb 2016 Member 0 Permalink

    @jrbc1 (View Post)

     

    im trying to get tips, or at least spread the word, this one  is different, lmao, we both have scratch and the powder toy