The Powder Toy

A Story

  • Schneumer     30th Mar 2016 Member 1 Permalink

    Kind of inspired by that other thread, but this is just going to be a story I'll probably never finish; it's "based" on a crappy narrative poem I wrote for school, forgive me for the (probably-going-to-be) awful story. Feel free to comment on it for feedback, pls no trollerino. Thanks gracias arigato xie xie (found out powder doesn't support Chinese...) merci

    https://docs.google.com/document/d/1DoDMcF1bsfX1-x8wmY2EjzTgXUg7tjgm-9-rVKHk6s4/edit

    Edited once by Schneumer. Last: 30th Mar 2016
  • Sandwichlizard     30th Mar 2016 Member 0 Permalink

    I want to know more.  its a good start.  rather poetic.  you should not disparage yourself.  Good to see you around.

  • nijalninja98     25th Apr 2016 Member 0 Permalink

    Hey cool, I know that no one has been on this thread for a while, but I think it is cool.

     

    Good to see you are still around Schneumer.

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