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Story of Ardrasil by planetArdrasil

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planetArdrasil
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10th July
22nd July
ESP's Ardrasil, home to alien life, hosts a story to itself.
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Comments

  • jangustheunemployed
    jangustheunemployed     2:47:01
    checked the rest of the stuff asside from the main chapters and i love the concept. keep up the good work
  • jangustheunemployed
    jangustheunemployed     2:44:58
    so i read the rest and ive come to the realization this was likely just for fun and not as a fully serious concept. yeah mb T-T
  • jangustheunemployed
    jangustheunemployed     2:42:41
    nice planet idea! not to be THAT guy and i know its important to the story but i feel like if it was going that fast it would destroy itself when going inter galactic. also i feel like it would completely freeze over before it could reach a star. if it did it would likely need a VERY slow pass by a hot star before being captured by a different one to get unfrozen. anyway sorry to write a paragraph but i thought this wasreally cool and i felt pretty passionate about it.