whats next the asus R.O.G system?
the star looks better now
you should make the star look way brighter at the center it wouldn't look much dimmer even from far away it would just look smaller.
looks good just needs a bit more details.
you are half right on the shading but it would still be way more crescent if the star was in the frame, other than that it looks 3d and is overall decent but like kyle said it could use more detail/craters