The Powder Toy

Ianuuraak Tundra by Wolvian

Wolvian
Wolvian
18 / 1
3rd March
4th March
A frozen wasteland, deep in the southern reaches of Suprastellas. No one inhabits this latitude any more, aas temperatures can drop below -78 degrees C. Deco and Ambient heat on.
suprastellas fire stone geology frozen suplocs caninespecies

Comments

  • intrestingperson1234
    intrestingperson1234     28th March
    Theatrum Scientiae Mysterii 3000
  • moches
    moches     10th March
    Epico.
  • gabriel_ultrakill
    gabriel_ultrakill     6th March
    kaboom. +1
  • ArolaunTech
    ArolaunTech     6th March
    the rocks look really good +1
  • EnganK
    EnganK     5th March
    I'm not an artist, so I can't give you any more specific advice, but I still recommend looking at other saves with similar themes to see how other people solved similar problems.
  • EnganK
    EnganK     5th March
    The most basic things I can recommend to improve are: 1) Make the trees a little more varied, they are clearly copied and pasted now, which is really noticeable due to the relatively complex design. 2) It would be better to make the large rooms of the underground complex less perfectly rectangular and add some effects on the border between them and the surrounding landscape, which looks good on its own, but ends too abruptly.
  • Wolvian
    Wolvian     5th March
    Also I have played your game, I do enjoy it.
  • Wolvian
    Wolvian     5th March
    Then how should I improve?
  • EnganK
    EnganK     5th March
    The lack of (not very successful) attempts at worldbuilding through signs and big numbers definitely worked to this save's advantage. The save itself is mediocre, but still +1